Layout 1 - WIP5

To be finished tomorrow, still lots to do! Big thanks to everyone for the critiques. Still need to act on your second critique Garib, thanks for that.

layouts

not going to change much to hand in for tomorrow. but i would love to get some feedback, because i will be attempting something like this again. the planet layout really disappointed me, Its just too muddy for my liking.

Layout 2 - Wip1

My second layout, just going at it in photoshop, no line art. Any crits welcome, still in the pretty early stages. This is going to be more of the speed/matte/ implied detail kind of thing. Not going for a super finished look.

Layout 1 - WIP3

Hey guys, here's where I'm at with my layout. Made changes to the sizing, hes now a lot smaller. Also added tentacles creeping up from behind the walk way to imply a greater sense of danger and no escape. I'm having some issues on where to place foreground tentacles; any suggestions on that or anything else are more than welcome. Lost a lot of back ground detail to the JPEG, there are actually 2 round sewer grates in the top back behind Conan.

Layout Rough